Feedback from a group pitch.

 When my group and I pitched our idea there were a few notes from our teachers on the idea, that we had to expand on. The first one is the fact that the main girl character has to have a target, why she would like to purposely kill somebody, especially in the lift. The second thing that our teachers drew our attention to is the fact that what kind of narrative of the story is going to be. Is she going to kill only him throughout the film? Is she going to be a type of killer that kills everyone or only men? All of that we had to discuss in between ourselves, in order to have more complete idea, in order for us then to be able to start thinking about other things such as planning. Apart from feedback from our teachers we discussed our idea in the group, so we had feedbacks from every members of the group. From that talk we agreed on the feedback that was given to us from teachers and we also talked a little more about whether the two characters  from the opening are going to be students, business workers or just a regular people. We agreed that it is going to be university students, because that would make a perfect sense of why woman would know her victim but he wouldn’t and why she would like to kill him.